What’s there is fine, but I think that what isn’t there; the details- could have made this story a memorable one.Anonymous readerReport 2016-01-08 20:39:01good story, similar to mine«1234» And this tale definitely got me hot & hard. Your story was arousing for me to read. Free porn 20 comments«1234»Tommy1606Report 2021-05-13 02:48:33Hot story, thanxTrib FanReport 2020-04-23 21:19:16I really truly love ‘first time’ stories. Descriptions of how they looked, what they wore, how they moved, how it felt. The trouble with this story is that it just tells what happened, and there could have been much more. Keep it up.Anonymous readerReport 2016-08-28 05:37:00lol she said not so hard, my boy was too gentle, i told him harder haha not bad writing, virgin stories arent my thing, moving on but keep it up!jrockittReport 2016-06-11 09:03:18That first time, the days of discovery, are always
