78 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2015-08-13 04:09:45it was a decent start; wish you’d kept writing. 78 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2015-08-13 04:09:45it was a decent start; wish you’d kept writing. Okxxx 78 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2015-08-13 04:09:45it was a decent start; wish you’d kept writing. neg rate for uWnatsAGoodFuckReport 2010-04-10 22:19:26this was a great story it felt sooooo good comeing to itAnonymous readerReport 2009-05-09 16:54:54very good story 7/10 more please«12345» neg rate for uWnatsAGoodFuckReport 2010-04-10 22:19:26this was a great story it felt sooooo good comeing to itAnonymous readerReport 2009-05-09 16:54:54very good story 7/10 more please«12345» neg rate for uWnatsAGoodFuckReport 2010-04-10 22:19:26this was a great story it felt sooooo good comeing to itAnonymous readerReport 2009-05-09 16:54:54very good story 7/10 more please«12345» Yes; there were some errors but enjoyable anywayanonymous readerReport 2011-12-27 19:46:13the plot was good except for the spelling and you need better describing, for example the dog should stay
