For example, why didn’t your protagonist lick and penetrate her ass with his tongue? Ok XXX Your character should’ve had HIS salad tossed in addition to pissing in both of her holes as well. You could also have described what her pussy, asshole, and pee smelled like. For example, why didn’t your protagonist lick and penetrate her ass with his tongue? Overall a decent story, too bad its in the archives and you’ve not likely posted recently. You did good, man :DAnonymous readerReport 2016-03-12 04:31:54To the moron who refers to himself as “Reader,” how can you leave out the details and still be descriptive?
