SLO DOWN, take it easy and start over. XXX When you get this far continue on with your story as you just dropped it off a cliff the first time. It’s my first story so gettinng used to the writing portion. It’s my first story so gettinng used to the writing portion. Keep going just slow down.«1» Keep going just slow down.«1» When you get this far continue on with your story as you just dropped it off a cliff the first time. When you get this far continue on with your story as you just dropped it off a cliff the first time. Spell check please, and greater story formulation wouldn’t hurt.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-21 06:38:58Take time to proof your stories.
