Such poor writing makes your story unenjoyable reading.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-11 02:05:09I liked it very much. You made several wrong choices in word selection (i.e. XXX Most of these errors could be corrected by proof-reading by a literate person BEFORE submitting your work. So how a pet should be treated and how my MASTER is with me. So how a pet should be treated and how my MASTER is with me. You made several wrong choices in word selection (i.e. So how a pet should be treated and how my MASTER is with me. Most of the time you guessed wrong. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-07 14:21:41Poor writing. You apparently don’t know when to use ‘its’ (possessive) and when to use ‘it’s’ (contraction of ‘it is’.
Actors:
Aubrey Sinclair / Justin Hunt
