1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2010-08-10 18:01:11could be a good story, looking at the formatting all the full stops and one paragraph, stopped me reading, suggest taking it back and re write«1» 1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2010-08-10 18:01:11could be a good story, looking at the formatting all the full stops and one paragraph, stopped me reading, suggest taking it back and re write«1» 1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2010-08-10 18:01:11could be a good story, looking at the formatting all the full stops and one paragraph, stopped me reading, suggest taking it back and re write«1» 1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2010-08-10 18:01:11could be a good story, looking at the formatting all the full stops and one paragraph, stopped me reading, suggest taking it back and re write«1» 1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2010-08-10 18:01:11could be a good story, looking at the formatting all the full stops and
