Your lover must love you! Okxxx Love the writing, keep it up 10/10READERReport 2007-10-16 14:25:55proper grammer in porn stories!! =]READERReport 2008-01-18 17:41:23well going over it i dont even see very many spelling errors, at least compared to some stories I have read. what an oxyMORON. what an oxyMORON. I ish waiting eagerly. And if it really bothers you so god damn much, copy it to word and fix it yourself before reading. I still think Einstein would approve heheheREADERReport 2007-10-09 06:29:11i loved the story i encourage you to keep writing and fuck these guys that say you need to use spell check i type almost 165 words a minute and i make a few mistakes, but hey when your typing alot of material who has time or cares to use spell check or check it your self
