I especially love the composition of the squatting down by the colorful trees.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-07 03:52:06good story and very well planned out but I’d suggest that you make it longer and add more detail to the characters.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-06 20:19:59Great story. Ok XXX anyways good story, I think you did a decent job with it, cant wait to read chapter 2, off to read it now.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-01 20:07:14Beautiful images Lisa. 9 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-05-22 20:50:02Great start to your stotyanonymous readerReport 2013-03-07 20:58:50that last comment makes no sense, whats this about squating by colorfull trees and the boy mom in you ? 9 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-05-22 20:50:02Great start to your stotyanonymous readerReport 2013-03-07 20:58:50that last comment makes no sense, whats this about squating by colorfull trees and the boy mom in you ? 9 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-05-22 20:50:02Great start to your stotyanonymous readerReport 2013-03-07
