Don’t get discouraged.«1234» The most valid subject that is missing is no insight into the second pregnancy of sister Mary, and the secrecy leading to or causing her to get pregnant the second time with someone other than her brother Sean!!! Porn Paragraphs are necessary, by using about five sentences for EACH paragraph and/or the changing of the thought processes or using more quotes of conversation to break into paragrpahs. There are minimal grammatical errors. Read some of the higher percentage stories and see how they make the story real. 17 comments«1234»bigdaddyg123Report 2014-12-30 07:31:08″A Secret Brother And Sister’s Secret Romance”- Twenty-two Year Old Brother Sean and Twenty Year Old Sister Mary. The writing needs work and some structure. The good news, the story context and theme is of fairly good quality.
