Check out better rated stories and see how to set the thing out properly. Porn …spacing, paragraphs, dialogue…etc. Me too. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2010-11-28 11:35:06I don’t care what the others say I liked it. this is the second of yours I have read and the theme is the same. But i still thought it was good and it made me cum!!!Anonymous readerReport 2009-02-24 17:27:47Somewhere in this mess is a reasonable story. Keep trying.«1» more please!Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-02 02:16:02It dont say who they r to eachother
N I didnt like it, I like ruff sex but that was over the line.Reader 2Report 2009-03-10 20:31:15The begining takes too long too develop while the end is too short… Me too. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2010-11-28 11:35:06I don’t care what the others say I liked it. But i still thought it was good and it
