I just submitted another story , a 2 part-er called ‘Taking Pictures of My Mom”. Sex video … I just believe an ellipsis at the beginning of every paragraph detracts from your overall presentation.droopysdadReport 2011-09-26 20:58:32I absolutely agree with Anonymous Reader. I do like what you write very much. Please, please, please stop with the “…” before every paragraph. To quote Wikipedia, ” When placed at the beginning or end of a sentence, the ellipsis can also inspire a feeling of melancholy longing. anyone who can’t follow reading one of your stories needs to take some classes on reading comprehensionblueheattReport 2011-09-26 06:59:27OK, the DOT DOT DOT is used ‘indent’ and ‘pause’.«12»
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