Sorry, maybe it’s someone else’s style. I kind of hate how he leaves her in the end but ok.!?anonymous readerReport 2012-08-15 21:59:15I can’t stand it. Porn lol«1» It felt a little short, but I don’t see how you could’ve made it longer. Good job, i guess. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-22 10:16:01The whole point is that he’s a douche, 8/10. It felt a little short, but I don’t see how you could’ve made it longer. Part 2 could either be good, or a disaster, so take your time, but do write one.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-16 23:14:32He is such a douche! Part 2 could either be good, or a disaster, so take your time, but do write one.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-16 23:14:32He is such a douche! Sorry, maybe it’s someone else’s style. This guy is a douche, so I can’t picture myself
