I do like how you were descriptive of Eric. Xxx video Again plot is good, and the story flows alright. However, I can’t stress this enough, character description is the difference between your “transgendered” boy or your “scrawny, frail” submissive boy. You say his body is “gender confused”. Again, I’m not trying to be a Bitch in any way, I’m just critiquing your work to try to make you a better writer.AnnistaysiaReport 2014-12-17 06:37:22So, this is the third in the series. However, I can’t stress this enough, character description is the difference between your “transgendered” boy or your “scrawny, frail” submissive boy. 8 comments«12»AnnistaysiaReport 2014-12-17 06:53:55I reread my previous comment and decided to post another to elaborate on something’s a little further.
