. . Porn . . . . . . . . . . . . . …awful«1» 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-30 12:29:20Need to really work on your grammar you are missing a lot of words in the middle of sentinces. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . …awful«1» . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . …awful«1» 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-30 12:29:20Need to really work on your grammar you are missing a lot of words in the middle of sentinces. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . …awful«1» . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . …awful«1» 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-30 12:29:20Need to really work on your grammar you are missing a lot of words in the middle of sentinces. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-30 12:29:20Need to really work on your grammar you are missing a lot of words in the middle of sentinces. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . …awful«1» . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . …awful«1» plus it feels like you are trying to speed through the story to rush and get it over, which makes me as a reader feel if you have no patience to take the time to write out the
