Don’t worry about grammar and all that crap, that’s not what makes a good story, and your rating completely resembles thatanonymous readerReport 2012-05-06 17:01:59u know what some ppl here are assholes everybody missspells stuff so sut the fuck up and leave him alone grate story«12345» Advice for your next though: really let your imagination flow. Advice for your next though: really let your imagination flow. Okxxx 29 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-01 11:36:4007346236479anonymous readerReport 2012-11-07 20:19:32Very good but a little too shortanonymous readerReport 2012-11-07 20:19:26Very good but a little too shortanonymous readerReport 2012-05-17 03:18:47I love all the themes or this story.. Don’t worry about grammar and all that crap, that’s not what makes a good story, and your rating completely resembles thatanonymous readerReport 2012-05-06 17:01:59u know what some ppl here are assholes everybody missspells stuff so sut the fuck up and leave
