give you a 5.READERReport 2006-02-18 20:32:09THAT was fucking shit u dickhead a mentaly retarded fuck could have done betterREADERReport 2006-02-18 01:00:15You Knoe wat i think the plot to the story was good but u should have made it longer and the sex part was toooo short so for me that was like a 5 min story to read so it kinda sucked but u should write it over jus a longer version to it. . Xxx video . …and that wat you call *Constructive Criticism*«12» Juvenile. 6 comments«12»READERReport 2006-02-20 17:50:03omg,as if the whole anal thing would of happend!Shes 14READERReport 2006-02-19 10:01:23Pretty lame. Juvenile. 6 comments«12»READERReport 2006-02-20 17:50:03omg,as if the whole anal thing would of happend!Shes 14READERReport 2006-02-19 10:01:23Pretty lame. give you a 5.READERReport 2006-02-18 20:32:09THAT was fucking shit u dickhead a mentaly retarded fuck could have done betterREADERReport 2006-02-18 01:00:15You Knoe wat i think the plot
