Your suggestions are lame. The story does have potential though, keep writing.READERReport 2005-10-23 08:43:03Actually, Silver Hair, his step-daughter Katie had C-cups, and the friend, Kelly, had D-cups, and the author made reference to them being the same size as his WIFE Clair who has D-cups …maybe you should take some notes moron.READERReport 2005-10-23 08:30:22Titman Al write your own stories. Xxx video (most writers at this site treat description like a drivers license with bra/penis size. This probably arises from the author being 19 but trying to write about an older married couple, write what you know (or at east what you can bullshit convincingly) There was very little description of the charecters except to throw a few numbers and letters at us.
