put more romance into it, and a little buildup.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-05 00:16:55Like the commentor below me said, you can do this, but you need to work on proofreading what you have written.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-28 08:33:38You need to Proofread, Spell Check, Keep the Gender Stright, keep the story flow stright and your good to go. put more romance into it, and a little buildup.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-05 00:16:55Like the commentor below me said, you can do this, but you need to work on proofreading what you have written.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-28 08:33:38You need to Proofread, Spell Check, Keep the Gender Stright, keep the story flow stright and your good to go. Sex video 14 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2011-11-18 15:41:25you can’t have the boyfriend make a threat and then drop it what happenedMerc098Report 2011-05-26 22:01:49Pretty good but there were a few spelling errors here and there.
