7 comments«12»READERReport 2007-01-30 02:50:57God awful, you rushed it and it was a trainwreck. Take your time to develop your stories.READERReport 2006-12-24 01:08:51I HARD BOOBIESREADERReport 2006-08-01 05:09:07write a part 1 now this was greatREADERReport 2006-07-31 04:44:35This story would have been much more erotic had it been told a little slower, building some anticipation of what was about to happen to each of the girls. Xxx video But it was OK. But it was OK. Some of the spelling was goshawful, but other than that it rates an 8/10.READERReport 2006-07-30 22:19:39″tongue”«12» Take your time to develop your stories.READERReport 2006-12-24 01:08:51I HARD BOOBIESREADERReport 2006-08-01 05:09:07write a part 1 now this was greatREADERReport 2006-07-31 04:44:35This story would have been much more erotic had it been told a little slower, building some anticipation of what was about to happen to each of the girls.
