I should be able to turn another part soon.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-23 19:35:26This is utter and complete shit, yet you decided to write another story after this. Ok XXX Since its grammatical errors is the issues, that is fixable. I should be able to turn another part soon.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-23 19:35:26This is utter and complete shit, yet you decided to write another story after this. 9 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-01-12 11:58:05Achilles &Briseis Faranonymous readerReport 2013-02-08 21:43:09needs a total rewrite by a GOOD WRITER that knows enough to use a GOOD EDITOR. I should be able to turn another part soon.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-23 19:35:26This is utter and complete shit, yet you decided to write another story after this. 9 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-01-12 11:58:05Achilles &Briseis Faranonymous readerReport 2013-02-08 21:43:09needs a total rewrite by a GOOD WRITER that knows enough to use a GOOD EDITOR.
