The writing errors detracted from the story.«1» That should tell the writer something–That the story is not a good one. Okxxx The content is good but the manner in which it is presented is pitiful. Gave it a 5.READERReport 2005-12-23 14:35:21That was a lovely storey and now I want to find the other ones
by this talented young lady – she has already made my pussy all wet and longing for her tongue! She gets a 10 from meREADERReport 2005-08-23 17:41:26The story would have been a lot better if the writing had been much better than it was. Gave it a 5.READERReport 2005-12-23 14:35:21That was a lovely storey and now I want to find the other ones
by this talented young lady – she has already made my pussy all wet and longing for her tongue!
