I’m not going to tell you to stop writing like some people will. Well not here anyway. Okxxx I’m not going to tell you to stop writing like some people will. My advice is to rewrite this and proof read it to make sure it works well before posting it. So i don’t know where you got that from. My advice is to rewrite this and proof read it to make sure it works well before posting it. Well not here anyway. Cya Later:)
Thel20anonymous readerReport 2013-05-10 10:58:11I’m not going to say it was bad but i will say that you really need to start proof reading. Cya Later:)
Thel20anonymous readerReport 2013-05-11 18:47:24Writing was quite rushed and the grammar quite terrible.
