You’ve earned this NEGATIVE VOTE.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-12 21:46:16to short it could have been a hole lot better it a great start to a story u just need more detail and u have a great hit.«1» have her doing moreanonymous readerReport 2011-04-13 11:16:19gave you a positive but you could have done alot more with it. Okxxx Having him realy put her though her paces. What an asshole. Just wonderful. What an asshole. 4 comments«1»demck23Report 2011-04-18 12:58:50good story line just have more action & have him do more to her . What an asshole. Having him realy put her though her paces. Having him realy put her though her paces. What an asshole. You’ve earned this NEGATIVE VOTE.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-12 21:46:16to short it could have been a hole lot better it a great start to a story u just need
