If I were an English Teacher, I thank the gods above that I am not, I would give this story an A. It was good, not great, just good. Ok XXX 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-15 19:57:10Hey, that was a pretty good story. It was believable in its content and wording. There was only a hint at sex. It was good, not great, just good. But keep on plugging away, you can improve.«1» It was good, not great, just good. There was only a hint at sex. But keep on plugging away, you can improve.«1» It was violent and rape was involved, but only implied. However, I can see why there were no codes. 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-15 19:57:10Hey, that was a pretty good story.
