then u switched from her POV to his. XXX …u really need to learn to write better & proofread ur work…it didn’t flow well at all. Don’t take credit for others work!anonymous readerReport 2011-08-17 11:27:06should we have the third part guys?«1» This is written by davidhog and is on this very site. then u switched from her POV to his. …u really need to learn to write better & proofread ur work…it didn’t flow well at all. I hope ur other works are better then this one.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-11 14:19:06hey don’t steal stories asshole! then u switched from her POV to his. …u really need to learn to write better & proofread ur work…it didn’t flow well at all. I hope ur other works are better then this one.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-11 14:19:06hey don’t steal stories asshole!
