15 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2014-06-13 14:18:53I louved thees story, and I am reeley lougged een. SEE?Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-17 17:34:39The story itself has potential. XXX SEE?Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-17 17:34:39The story itself has potential. But you need to clean it up and resubmit it. SEE?Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-17 17:34:39The story itself has potential. I enjoyed it. It’s very distracting when you’re interested in a part, then suddenly it repeats several paragraphs.«123» I stopped right there and couldn’t keep reading. SEE?Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-17 17:34:39The story itself has potential. And the paragraphs repeating is really annoyinganonymous readerReport 2012-02-08 17:01:57No, No, No, No, No, No!anonymous readerReport 2011-02-06 22:06:24The story itself was pretty good. I enjoyed it. I enjoyed it. The constant repeating of the same paragraphs randomly, and the atrocious use of question marks for apostrophes was very distracting.
