ur story sucksREADERReport 2007-10-07 23:00:04dude u fucking suckREADERReport 2007-02-03 21:59:24story was fine, it would help iff you had a proof reader to fix the fuck ups. Porn decent story i suppose, but i really do have to agree with the sum of the above comments; you really need to proof read your stories. how do i put this nicely… 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2010-05-18 09:29:11ummmm… how do i put this nicely… Igave you a 5/10«12» Igave you a 5/10«12» how do i put this nicely… Igave you a 5/10«12» keep on writingREADERReport 2006-10-14 18:04:51I don’t know what is true and what is fantasy,at least
it is not a father/daughter a sister thing or a uncle/niece fuck job. ur story sucksREADERReport 2007-10-07 23:00:04dude u fucking suckREADERReport 2007-02-03 21:59:24story was fine, it would help iff you had a proof reader to fix the fuck
