Keep at it!READERReport 2006-05-13 23:24:28That was great keep up the true stories. XXX Having wrote that I liked the story and look forward to your next effort.READERReport 2007-07-28 04:30:13He should have the women laying doggy style and fuck each in turn ,one minute fuckingyou while toching Kizas cunt and ice versa. Having wrote that I liked the story and look forward to your next effort.READERReport 2007-07-28 04:30:13He should have the women laying doggy style and fuck each in turn ,one minute fuckingyou while toching Kizas cunt and ice versa. Keep at it!READERReport 2006-05-13 23:24:28That was great keep up the true stories. Remember you must do it before writing it.«12» After you draft your next one, try reading it aloud to catch the little grammar problems and the few word choice issues in this one.
