This probably arises from the author being 19 but trying to write about an older married couple, write what you know (or at east what you can bullshit convincingly) There was very little description of the charecters except to throw a few numbers and letters at us. Ok XXX This story has definite potential. Come on guys, give us some freckles, glasses, and tattoos.) The dialogue was erratic, but dialogue is hard. Come on guys, give us some freckles, glasses, and tattoos.) The dialogue was erratic, but dialogue is hard. Come on guys, give us some freckles, glasses, and tattoos.) The dialogue was erratic, but dialogue is hard. For all the build up, the sex scene(s?) was kind of anticlimactic. This probably arises from the author being 19 but trying to write about an older
