the angle with the kid in part 2 took the whole story and made it seem implausible. Porn 8 comments«12»READERReport 2008-04-19 01:30:44Part 1 was excellent. you had solid gold going here with the blackmail, and the characters were believable…then you threw it away so fast
I agree. Part two however just didn’t cut it.READERReport 2008-01-21 02:18:19Part 1 was excellent. the angle with the kid in part 2 took the whole story and made it seem implausible. 8 comments«12»READERReport 2008-04-19 01:30:44Part 1 was excellent. the angle with the kid in part 2 took the whole story and made it seem implausible. 8 comments«12»READERReport 2008-04-19 01:30:44Part 1 was excellent. the angle with the kid in part 2 took the whole story and made it seem implausible. the angle with the kid in part 2 took the whole story and made it
