5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-10-20 02:27:29This was great a few grammar mistakes but overall great please continueanonymous readerReport 2012-10-20 02:26:19This was great a few grammar mistakes but overall great please continueanonymous readerReport 2012-10-03 05:10:23At last, someone comes up with the “right” asnwer!LilSnowReport 2012-05-10 18:09:50ignore that comment, in fact ignore all negative comments from anon users. Theres not much wrong with this at all, sure it was a little lacking in detail at the end but the start was exellent. Xxx video I’d advise you to continue both stories and use this one to try out ideas for the other and get feedback to make it as good as possible. Theres not much wrong with this at all, sure it was a little lacking in detail at the end but the start was exellent.
